Etiqueta: Temptation plot

  • What is red, relishing and terrible? Our Lady’s Child p2

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    It was not long before the Virgin Mary came back from her journey. She called the girl before her, and
    asked to have the keys of heaven back.
    When the maiden gave her the bunch,
    the Virgin looked into her eyes and said, “Hast
    thou not opened the thirteenth door also?” “No,” she replied.
    Then she laid
    her hand on the girl’s heart, and felt how it beat and beat, and saw right well
    that she had disobeyed her order and had opened the door. Then she said once
    again, “Art thou certain that thou hast not done it?”

    “Yes,” said the girl, for the second time. Then she perceived the finger which had become
    golden from touching the fire of heaven, and saw well that the child had
    sinned, and said for the third time “Hast thou not done it?” “No,” said the
    girl for the third time.
    Then said
    the Virgin Mary, “Thou hast not obeyed me, and besides that thou hast lied,
    thou art no longer worthy to be in heaven.”

    Then the girl fell into a deep sleep, and when she awoke she
    lay on the earth below, and in the midst of a wilderness. She wanted to cry
    out, but she could bring forth no sound. She sprang up and wanted to run away,
    but whithersoever she turned herself, she was continually held back by thick
    hedges of thorns through which she could not break. In the desert, in which she was imprisoned, there stood an old hollow
    tree, and this had to be her dwelling-place.
    Into this she crept when night
    came, and here she slept. Here, too, she found a shelter from storm and rain,
    but it was a miserable life, and bitterly did she weep when she remembered how
    happy she had been in heaven, and how the angels had played with her. Roots and
    wild berries were her only food, and for these she sought as far as she could
    go.

    In the autumn she picked up the fallen nuts and leaves, and
    carried them into the hole. The nuts were her food in winter, and when snow and
    ice came, she crept amongst the leaves like a poor little animal that she might
    not freeze. Before long her clothes were all torn, and one bit of them after
    another fell off her. As soon, however, as the sun shone warm again, she went
    out and sat in front of the tree, and her long hair covered her on all sides
    like a mantle. Thus she sat year after year, and felt the pain and the misery
    of the world. One day, when the
    trees were once more clothed in fresh green, the King of the country was hunting in the forest, and followed a
    roe, and as it had fled into the thicket which shut in this part of the forest,
    he got off his horse, tore the bushes asunder, and cut himself a path with his
    sword. When he had at last forced his way through, he saw a wonderfully beautiful maiden sitting under the tree; and
    she sat there and was entirely covered with her golden hair down to her very
    feet. He stood still and looked at her full of surprise, then he spoke to her
    and said, “Who art thou? Why art thou sitting here in the wilderness?” But she
    gave no answer, for she could not open her mouth. The King continued, “Wilt thou go with me to my castle?” Then
    she just nodded her head a little. The King took her in his arms, carried her
    to his horse, and rode home with her
    , and when he reached the royal castle
    he caused her to be dressed in beautiful garments, and gave her all things in
    abundance. Although she could not speak,
    she was still so beautiful and charming that he began to love her with all his
    heart, and it was not long before he married her.
    After a year or so had
    passed, the Queen brought a son into the world. Thereupon the Virgin Mary appeared to her in the night when she lay in her
    bed alone, and said, “If thou wilt tell
    the truth and confess that thou didst unlock the forbidden door, I will open
    thy mouth and give thee back thy speech, but if thou perseverest in thy sin,
    and deniest obstinately, I will take thy new-born child away with me.”
    Then
    the queen was permitted to answer, but she remained hard, and said, “No, I did
    not open the forbidden door;” and the Virgin Mary took the new-born child from
    her arms, and vanished with it. Next
    morning when the child was not to be found, it was whispered among the people
    that the Queen was a man-eater, and had killed her own child.
    She heard all
    this and could say nothing to the contrary, but the King would not believe it,
    for he loved her so much. When a year
    had gone by the Queen again bore a son
    , and in the night the Virgin Mary again came to her, and
    said, “If thou wilt confess that thou openedst the forbidden door, I will give
    thee thy child back and untie thy tongue; but if you continuest in sin and
    deniest it, I will take away with me this new child also.” Then the Queen again
    said, “No, I did not open the forbidden door;” and the Virgin took the child
    out of her arms, and away with her to heaven. Next morning, when this child also had disappeared, the people
    declared quite loudly that the Queen had devoured it, and the King’s
    councillors demanded that she should be brought to justice. The King, however, loved her so dearly that
    he would not believe it, and commanded the councillors under pain of death not
    to say any more about it.
    The
    following year the Queen gave birth to a beautiful little daughter, and for the
    third time the Virgin Mary appeared to her
    in the night and said, “Follow
    me.” She took the Queen by the hand and led her to heaven, and showed her there
    her two eldest children, who smiled at her, and were playing with the ball of
    the world. When the Queen rejoiced thereat, the Virgin Mary said, Is thy heart not yet softened? If thou wilt own that thou openedst the
    forbidden door, I will give thee back thy two little sons.”
    But for the
    third time the Queen answered, “No, I did not open the forbidden door.” Then
    the Virgin let her sink down to earth once more, and took from her likewise her
    third child. Next morning, when the
    loss was reported abroad, all the people cried loudly, “The Queen is a
    man-eater. She must be judged,” and the King was no longer able to restrain
    his councillors. Thereupon a trial was held, and as she could not answer, and
    defend herself, she was condemned to be burnt alive.
    The wood was got
    together, and when she was fast bound to the stake, and the fire began to burn round about her, the hard ice of pride melted,
    her heart was moved by repentance, and she thought, “If I could but confess
    before my death that I opened the door.”
    Then her voice came back to her,
    and she cried out loudly, “Yes, Mary, I did it;” and straight-way rain fell from
    the sky and extinguished the flames of fire, and a light broke forth above her,
    and the Virgin Mary descended with the two little sons by her side, and the
    new-born daughter in her arms. She spoke kindly to her, and said, “He who
    repents his sin and acknowledges it, is forgiven.” Then she gave her the three
    children, untied her tongue, and granted her happiness for her whole life.

    Temptation plot, Grimm brothers, Our lady’s child,

     

    By a great forest dwelt a wood-cutter with his wife and an only
    child. One morning there stood before him the Virgin Mary, She took her up to
    heaven with her. When she was fourteen years of age, the Virgin Mary called her
    one day and said, “Dear child, I am about to make a long journey, so take into
    thy keeping the keys of the thirteen doors of heaven. Twelve of these thou
    mayest open, and behold the glory which is within them, but the thirteenth, to
    which this little key belongs, is forbidden thee. Beware of opening it, or thou
    wilt bring misery on thyself.”

    She sought out the key, and when she had got it in her hand,
    she put it in the lock, and when she had put it in, she turned it round as
    well. Then the door sprang open; she touched the light a little with her
    finger, and her finger became quite golden.

    It was not long before the Virgin Mary came back from her
    journey. She called the girl before her, and asked to have the keys of heaven
    back…..

  • What is red, relishing and terrible? Our Lady’s Child p1

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    By a great forest dwelt a wood-cutter with his wife, who had an only child, a little girl three years old. They were so poor, however, that they no longer had daily bread, and did not know how to get food for her. One morning the wood-cutter went out sorrowfully to his work in the forest, and while he was cutting wood, suddenly there stood before him a tall and beautiful woman with a crown of shining stars on her head, who said to him, “I am the Virgin Mary, mother of the child Jesus. Thou art poor and needy, bring thy child to me, I will take her with me and be her mother, and care for her.” The wood-cutter obeyed, brought his child, and gave her to the Virgin Mary, who took her up to heaven with her.

    There the child fared well, ate sugar-cakes, and drank sweet milk, and her clothes were of gold, and the little angels played with her. And when she was fourteen years of age, the Virgin Mary called her one day and said, “Dear child, I am about to make a long journey, so take into thy keeping the keys of the thirteen doors of heaven. Twelve of these thou mayest open, and behold the glory which is within them, but the thirteenth, to which this little key belongs, is forbidden thee. Beware of opening it, or thou wilt bring misery on thyself.”

    The girl promised to be obedient, and when the Virgin Mary was gone, she began to examine the dwellings of the kingdom of heaven. Each day she opened one of them, until she had made the round of the twelve. In each of them sat one of the Apostles in the midst of a great light, and she rejoiced in all the magnificence and splendour, and the little angels who always accompanied her rejoiced with her. Then the forbidden door alone remained, and she felt a great desire to know what could be hidden behind it, and said to the angels, “I will not quite open it, and I will not go inside it, but I will unlock it so that we can just see a little through the opening.” “Oh no,” said the little angels, “that would be a sin. The Virgin Mary has forbidden it, and it might easily cause thy unhappiness.”

    Then she was silent, but the desire in her heart was not stilled, but gnawed there and tormented her, and let her have no rest. And once when the angels had all gone out, she thought, “Now I am quite alone, and I could peep in. If I do it, no one will ever know.” She sought out the key, and when she had got it in her hand, she put it in the lock, and when she had put it in, she turned it round as well. Then the door sprang open, and she saw there the Trinity sitting in fire and splendour. She stayed there awhile, and looked at everything in amazement; then she touched the light a little with her finger, and her finger became quite golden. Immediately a great fear fell on her.

    She shut the door violently, and ran away. Her terror too would not quit her, let her do what she might, and her heart beat continually and would not be still; the gold too stayed on her finger, and would not go away, let her rub it and wash it never so much.

    It was not long before the Virgin Mary came back from her journey. She called the girl before her, and asked to have the keys of heaven back…..

  • What is terrible, red and relishing? : plot and temptation p2

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    TEMPATION AND THE LAW

    Religion aside, sin might bring us the legal consequences know as divorce, fines and criminal convictions. Misdeeds need to be paid for. Stare at our blood stained hands… Hence the temptation’s conflict: I won’t be caught. I enjoyed doing it but now I’m paranoic looking over my shoulder. I’m so bloody happy I don’t give a bone on consequences… Till there’s the sight of the avenger-law (which lately requires vigilantes to fulfill the role against corporatives and the long etcetera).
    This is why temptation plot is propaganda plot.  Plot reveals the moral code of the writer. Writers, we can’t strip from our morals when deciding the ruling idea. We can strip of it at the time of thinking like a character but never when choosing the ending.

    MORAL CODES

    Our plot has a different moral code? We will need a scene to show how it works. Or many. Explanations are in need so we can understand the character’s choices. Author’s moral is not the only thing on sight. There are Earthly and local codes ingrained to the core of the narrative.

    «Evil» varies in scale. In Brimstone and Roses (webtoon, yet to be finished), it is illegal; not immoral, to summon a devil. Temptation can be something as bland as crossing the lines of illegality…

    Specially if we can universe crossover. Like in Parallel (movie, 2018), where parallel universes do exist and we can find dead lovers, inventors or artists living in similar economies and social environments. All reachable by special entrances in mirrors.

    What’s the temptation? Sell advanced and potentially lethal technologies to the military in OUR universe. Shoot yourself to dead to be with the already deceased lover. Steal your own novels from the other me… More talented. The movie accepts little to no punishment… If you don’t take being killed by your dopple ganger as punishment. I mean, you are you, right?

    FAIRYTALES

    Temptation is the great topic of fairy tales. «Don’t do» and doing follows. Blue beard’s wife opens the door. Now we have the corpses and the plot thickens.



    Ronald B. Tobias exemplifies temptation in a Grimm’s fairytale I haven’t found in the Porrua edition[1]: Our Lady’s child. A tale I might add to the next entry.
    Are you tempted to like the entry? Please do. Or not; you might find the corpses. Pasto kalo.


    [1] For your information and even if you haven’t requested it, Porrua is a thrifty Mexican publishing house which prints the most famous and popular books in a tiny typography and Bible paper (the super thin kind).

  • What is terrible, red and relishing?: plot and temptation p1

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    SIN, EVIL OR STUPID?

    Temptation is the prelude to sin. The usual mortal sin like gluttony, sloth (maybe this one does really count), rage, lust… Seen as something immoral or stupid. Nowadays mostly the stupid.

    The YouTele video which keeps us from cooking a proper dinner, irresistible chats with a friend instead of writing, reading BL, planting evidence. Steal what’s on sight but nobody will notice. Not to pay taxes. Eat the extra bit of donut which goes off your diet by 5000 calories.

    TEMPTATION PLOT

    Welcome to the decadent, forbidden flavoured plot called temptation. Ronald B. Tobias (20 master plots) starts the explanation opening the chapter by quoting Oscar Wilde and mentioning the superstars of Christian-hebrew narrative plus a sliding animal. I won’t.
    I will mention though, the two only outcomes for this plot.

    Either the character resists or succumbs to temptation. Maybe we can make a second plot up called Redemption out of succumbing to it.



    THE DEED’S DONE

    Conscious there, the Erinyes come and torment us with their whips. If not them; karma does its job —a cute and endearing way of believing politicians will meet their demise for using our taxes gilding their home doors or that the hideous neighbour might step on dog’s excretions for playing too loud music in parties we’re not invited to. For religious people, consequences to sin go from arriving to an overly warm place (where to burn, be disjointed and other delicacies) to ice avalanches, reincarnation into a goat-ant-insect or whatever the imagination their highest priest can craftily conjure. In a few words, the best crafted storytelling to incite fear.

    TO BE CONTINUED